I'm new in this story, honestly i start to read because a was searching for new things.
I need to tell that I love this game, I wasn't hoping to much, but it got me, I love tonraq, it's adorable, it took me a few days to read it all because university, but i've loved every part, this got me to much, I'm gonna wait for the next update, i wish the best to the creator this is so good, i need to remark once again that i loved it.
(sorry if I say something bad, english isn't my main language)
I will say, I am a bit confused by the timeline. It sounds like the breakup with Darryl happened about a year before the start of the VN but the messages from Darryl and the flashback to the breakup both make it seem like the breakup just happened right before the trip to his sister's which also makes sense in that the breakup would be the catalyst to go visit his sister.
Which is it? I am leaning towards a year ago but the texts are strange. I am still going through at least so maybe it will clear up.
I also noticed that Philip used his card instead of cash when he bought coffee and just assumed that you messed that up. I see now that that is not the case, very nice detail!
okay, so i'm new with this VN, and i just play the lastest update. I just realize that all of the public release are not included in the lastest update. So, I'm confused for the story itself. Do i have to download every patch/build from the beginning?
Just finished up to the current public build... in love with Ton lol. I've seen this floating around for a while but finally got the time to sit down and play and enjoyed it thoroughly. Ton is so adorable, excited for more. Good work and wishing good health to everyone involved
Tonraq is a lot of fun for me, personally. He doesn't talk or behave like a lot of VN love interests. Plus he's got that dry sense of humor once he opens up.
If I may ask, is Tonraq the only love interest ? Or would there be more options ? (Not that I'm complaining about Tonraq, since I can love him for years on end 😁)
I really enjoyed this VN. Had some very sweet moments. Is the author Canadian?? Also my only complaint is you are using the wrong province. Iskut and Tuktsayda mountains are in British Columbia (were I live) not the Yukon. Plus if we gonna use Canadian wild life were is the moose??
I'm not actually Canadian, so I've been doing my best. Fun fact! Philip was originally going to be a moose.
And, yeah, hah. I was doing some research on Chris' path to get to his sister, and it passes right by Iskut. Didn't discover it wasn't in the Yukon until I had everything settled.
Thats awesome!! Ya this story is really enjoyable. Like how Chris has a type "not out but sorta". Also glad Philip isn't a moose being a snow leopard fits better. I would see a moose more as a courier/delivery guy. Since they can travel long distances. Plus they can ram a train off the tracks so a little to burly to be a doctor.
Keep up the great work. Looking forward to more heartfelt moments <3<3
Xou've done an excellent job with pacing the romance :) it feels very natural, which is no easy task, especially when xou consider the circumstances that drive the story UwU
I can tell that writing romance is what drives xou as a writer, as xour skills really shine in these scenes~ ^^_
Aw, thanks! Making sure that pacing is on point has been a priority with me.
Romance is certainly a driving factor with this story. I wanted a large portion of it to revolve around opening Tonraq up and exploring the blooming relationship between him and Chris~
Then xou've set everything up really well for that :) it's always fun to be caught in a compromising situation and to find love in the most unexpected of places, even better when it's with a tsundere like Tonraq :p
Finished reading through the last update, and my horny ass was pretty satisfied. Great job so far! Can't wait for the next one, where maaybe the unexpected new character is explored more? 👀
Dammmm I am enjoying this, the only thing I didn't like was the "to be continued" at the end, I am really glad I found this vn, I wish there was a way to find gems like this easier eheh
There is size difference between the two due to the nature of their species and body types. You can see it for yourself in the comparison image between sprites here.
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Right now!
I like the visual novel is amazing i'll waiting other update
Wait no longer!~
how many nsfw cgs are there in total?
There's a handful so far! Bound to be more later~
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I'm new in this story, honestly i start to read because a was searching for new things.
I need to tell that I love this game, I wasn't hoping to much, but it got me, I love tonraq, it's adorable, it took me a few days to read it all because university, but i've loved every part, this got me to much, I'm gonna wait for the next update, i wish the best to the creator this is so good, i need to remark once again that i loved it.
(sorry if I say something bad, english isn't my main language)
I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far! It's really gratifying to see when people genuinely enjoy the story so much~
i think ist just me, but every time i download the archive is corrupted
What platform are you attempting to download/install it on?
I haven't finished the previous update yet, the new update released already ...
I like Yuka's new appearance. He looks more ‘mature’
Honestly, I love Yuka's new appearance as well. It's a major glowup~
I will say, I am a bit confused by the timeline. It sounds like the breakup with Darryl happened about a year before the start of the VN but the messages from Darryl and the flashback to the breakup both make it seem like the breakup just happened right before the trip to his sister's which also makes sense in that the breakup would be the catalyst to go visit his sister.
Which is it? I am leaning towards a year ago but the texts are strange. I am still going through at least so maybe it will clear up.
Overall fantastic!
I also noticed that Philip used his card instead of cash when he bought coffee and just assumed that you messed that up. I see now that that is not the case, very nice detail!
About a year ago, yeah! It's not fully spelled out, so I can see why things might be a lil confusing.
okay, so i'm new with this VN, and i just play the lastest update. I just realize that all of the public release are not included in the lastest update. So, I'm confused for the story itself. Do i have to download every patch/build from the beginning?
Oops, that's my fault!
I accidentally uploaded a test build. The 0.8.1 version will have the story from the beginning.
Ahh, i see... Hope i can read the 0.8.1 version ASAP, cause im curious what exactly happened to Chris (even i have the general picture to it)
I like how this is going so far. I just noticed a little mistake... (possible spoiler)
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There's an space missing in this line between "clothes" and "a".
That's all. Thank you! :D
Edit: Also, Why doesn't USA use the metric system! As far as i know, it's the only country in the world that doesn't, XD
Just finished up to the current public build... in love with Ton lol. I've seen this floating around for a while but finally got the time to sit down and play and enjoyed it thoroughly. Ton is so adorable, excited for more. Good work and wishing good health to everyone involved
Tonraq is a lot of fun for me, personally. He doesn't talk or behave like a lot of VN love interests. Plus he's got that dry sense of humor once he opens up.
How much of the story is finished?
The latest 0.8.1 build has the entire story so far! Sorry about the possible confusion!
Oh my god, the reworks are just so...
🥰🥰🥰🥰
I know, right? Very big upgrade~
A very warm story, love this polar bear, thank you for making this fvn, looking forward to the next update.
Hey, thank you for reading! Without an audience, we wouldn't get anywhere.
If I may ask, is Tonraq the only love interest ? Or would there be more options ? (Not that I'm complaining about Tonraq, since I can love him for years on end 😁)
By the looks of things, this VN is linear. Tonraq's the only route.
I really enjoyed this VN. Had some very sweet moments. Is the author Canadian?? Also my only complaint is you are using the wrong province. Iskut and Tuktsayda mountains are in British Columbia (were I live) not the Yukon. Plus if we gonna use Canadian wild life were is the moose??
I'm glad you've been enjoying the VN so far!
I'm not actually Canadian, so I've been doing my best. Fun fact! Philip was originally going to be a moose.
And, yeah, hah. I was doing some research on Chris' path to get to his sister, and it passes right by Iskut. Didn't discover it wasn't in the Yukon until I had everything settled.
Thats awesome!! Ya this story is really enjoyable. Like how Chris has a type "not out but sorta". Also glad Philip isn't a moose being a snow leopard fits better. I would see a moose more as a courier/delivery guy. Since they can travel long distances. Plus they can ram a train off the tracks so a little to burly to be a doctor.
Keep up the great work. Looking forward to more heartfelt moments <3<3
A couple'a scenes made me tear up.
Damn, I love this VN.
Aww, I'm glad it's been a good read so far!
Hope you'll enjoy the later chapters too~
Oh, oh....
I don't know it's the time for update!
Wait, how tall exactly are Tonraq and Chris?
SPOILER ALERT!
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Somehow, I could sniff Tonraq and Yuka relationship since Chris' first check-up
Sounds like my little hints paid off~
Tonraq is 7'11" and Chris is 5'11"~
They're tall!
what a juicy update i loved it
Xou've done an excellent job with pacing the romance :) it feels very natural, which is no easy task, especially when xou consider the circumstances that drive the story UwU
I can tell that writing romance is what drives xou as a writer, as xour skills really shine in these scenes~ ^^_
Amazing work! n_n/
Aw, thanks! Making sure that pacing is on point has been a priority with me.
Romance is certainly a driving factor with this story. I wanted a large portion of it to revolve around opening Tonraq up and exploring the blooming relationship between him and Chris~
Then xou've set everything up really well for that :) it's always fun to be caught in a compromising situation and to find love in the most unexpected of places, even better when it's with a tsundere like Tonraq :p
Keep up all the great work! ^^_
I'm a little late responding to this, but thanks so much for your support!
Balancing pacing and different elements of the story has always been important to us~
I love this VN! Keep up the good work!
love your work, but the linux update is,nt here yet.
Whoops, my bad! It should be labeled properly now.
Thank you.
So weird to read when your real name is Chris, but definitely one of the best VNs out there right now.
That's very flattering! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much~
Finished reading through the last update, and my horny ass was pretty satisfied. Great job so far! Can't wait for the next one, where maaybe the unexpected new character is explored more? 👀
WHEN WILL THE UPDATE?
THIS IS SO FRICKING AMAZING I REALLY WANT TO READ MORE ABOUT THEM
(Please don't be angry at me)
YESSSSSSSSSS
Right now, actually!
Thanks author to not hang up us, the readers, like the previous build 😅
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I want to cuddle with Tonraq too...
Don't worry! We get to see some bear-snuggling soon~
Greetings Author,
We have some questions want to ask you, is about the story, hope you can tell us.
1. How many chapters you expect to write?
2. What is the current progress of the game?
3. Is Chris and Tonraq will be more close?
If you want to DM . I was send private message to you in twitter. You can use that. Waiting for you response.
eu amei essa 🐻❄️❤️🦦
Cute,
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Ah, that's still a favorite of mine~
Oh dear. I don't think the world can handle two of them.
Thanks for pointing this out! We're already working on a fix~
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This happens when I start a new game.
Oops! We're working on getting this fixed!
Edit: The latest update is out now; it should work~
Aw, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much! The relationship between Tonraq and Chris is a fun one since it's more of a slow burn~
Dammmm I am enjoying this, the only thing I didn't like was the "to be continued" at the end, I am really glad I found this vn, I wish there was a way to find gems like this easier eheh
Haha, don't worry, the next update will be out at the start of next month.
And, yeah, we're a smaller project so it's harder to get noticed. It just makes comments like these more special~
Sorry for bother you, Author.
We noticed in apk version, seems like Chris's avator can't show in lower left corner. So we try to fix it, and why this happened.
We found that because new phone's screen is too long, making Ren'Py take it as a small device.
So it might be helpful to use an variable "renpy.variant("small")" to re-set up.
Here is the variable need to change in screen.rpy
Add the code below:
if renpy.variant("small"):
add SideImage() xalign 0.0 yalign 1.0
In "style window" (In row 1451) add :
left_padding 130
Here is the picture add above code result
Test Phone: Google Pixel 6
Thank you for the reply! I forwarded the information to my programmer to see what we can do~
If you want let the text move to right, just change "left_padding".
If you want, we also can provide screens.rpy and apk for you.
Oh dear. That's not good descriptors for things other people might enjoy.
Regardless, you don't need to worry! This VN mostly narrative focused--so, kinks/sex are on the side.
Thanks for the compliment, though! We're a small project, so there's not a lot of traction when it comes to publicity, haha.
There is size difference between the two due to the nature of their species and body types. You can see it for yourself in the comparison image between sprites here.
Welp, it's out now! Look forward for the next public update with more CGs~
Oh? Do what?~
Wow, another update!
... And, my mind goes blank when I saw "to be continued...." sentence
Gotta leave things on a cliff hanger~