HOLY SHIT THIS VN IS SO GOOD! PERFEECCTOO!!! This is BY FAR the best slice of life VNs I have read so far (over 20 VNs read so far). I AM SO LOOKING FORWARDD TO THE AUTHOR'S FUTURE WORKS!!! EASILY 5 STAR RATING. ABSOLUTELLYY RECOMMENDED TO READ IF YOU LOVE CRYING TO INTIMATE MOMENTS 😔🤚
A day after finished readcthe story I just dreamed with a aged man coming to the place where I lived in Rio telling me I am going to met someone. So after I was surrounded by four or five kids/teenagers and young man c9me after with black hair that flow above his shoulders.
They look like all from same place.
That would be nice to have a family like that maybe."
Absolutely adore this VN! It hits all the right buttons for me: Lovable, endearing characters, well paced and written story, genuine romance and tender moments, and fantastic artwork and sprites. It was an absolute joy to experience~
If you're asking then you're probably on mobile. I've found that you can't rate itch.io games on mobile for some reason. If your on mobile chrome which is what I use. There should be three circles in the top right corner. Tap that and scroll until you see "Desktop site". Once you tap that, the page you're on should reload and be slightly changed. Then you'll see "Rate this game" in the top right corner of the page. From there you don't need me to tell you what to. To reverse the changes you just do what you did before.
what's the name of the song that plays during the Northern Lights scene? I fliping love it, from the lyrics, the instumentation, the vocals, to even the dynamics, Everything is balanced in such an amazing way, it fits the scene perfectly, and I would love to add it to my playlists
just finished the main story, such a heart filled romance story, so many story's I've read on here have been completly centered on intercourse, but with this one, we're able to skip completly past the sex scenes, not only that, but we're able to do it in a way that fits organicly with the story, in many other vns, they'll just cut out the artwork or have a weird scene jump in it, but this does it in a way that fits the story so smoothly.
It's just so amaizing how well you conveied the characters emotions, I could feel the love between the two grow graduly until it reached its peak when they confessed that love, and the choice to have it be an option, rather than just another text blurb to read through adds so much to moment, adding more weight to it, giving some actual meaning to it, its not something being said out of expectations or just because, the characters actually mean it.
Ima stop rambling now, This was such a joy to read, and I'm excited to read the epliouge, thank you for the story.
We are a team of ExGames translators. We would like to ask permission to translate your vn's from the original language into russian. A lot of people liked your novel, but due to the language barrier they cannot read it in the original. Our team is translating various furry novels into Russian, and in order for people to be able to touch your work, we are asking for your permission to translate. There are a large number of short stories in the list of translations we have, and we would like your short story to join it.
Our translators receive a nominal payment for translation, since the project is supported by donations from Russian-speaking readers. For translation, we use only publicly available versions of novels and, after translation is completed, we post them on a platform similar to Patreon for a period of 1-2 weeks for those who want to get earlier access to the translation. Subsequently, the translation becomes publicly available and any user can download it for free.
For each publication, we always add a link to the page with the novel, and if necessary, we can insert links to your social networks.
We are also ready to provide all the necessary translation files for their implementation in the official assembly, if you are interested in expanding the number of available languages for reading.
We really hope for a positive decision, as we want to further develop the Russian-speaking furry community.
Thanks for your time! Best regards, ExGames Translation Team❤️❤️
I haven't read any visual novel in a couple of years but when I saw this I was like why not?
Man was I in for a roller-coaster of emotions. I wouldn't have thought that I would spend my entire day reading this but it was so worth. It was always something about these types of visual novels that makes you appreciate life. Regarding the story, it gets a 11/10 in my book. I feel like the pace was well written and each character had their own set of value in the story. I regret not picking this up sooner. I'm just speechless, man. I hope I'm not the only one feeling this way. The message this whole story really speaks to me, I've been in a super similar predicament as the MC so it really resonated with me. Thank you again for creating this wonderful story.
I can’t tell you how much this story just, wow. Blew me off my feet. All the characters are wonderfully written, and I was feeling the same emotions that our lovely pairing was feeling all throughout.
Tonraq is up there with some of my favorite furry visual novel guys. Honestly, it felt like a movie I could keep watching, even if it, like everything, has to end eventually.
Thank you for sharing this with us. From one creator to another, this only pushes me to do the same. Truly, it was a great experience.
Honestly one of the best VNs I have ever read. Such an incredible story. I was sad it was over; But, after finding out there is an extra story coming our continuing this world has me so excited! 10/10
I just finished reading it, and wow, it’s without a doubt the most incredible story I’ve ever read! I’m honestly at a loss for words every part of it was breathtaking the story is beautifully crafted, heartwarming, and so impactful. Huge thanks to the dev for creating such an amazing masterpiece!
I haven't cried so hard like this since finishing Adastra and I think this vn is one of the best VNs I ever read comparing to Adastra this vn is the next best one like a 15/10 in the score and my love to this heartwarming vn
Acabó de terminar con esta historia y fue increíble no me esperaba que me causará muchas emociones fue muy emotivo como se fue desarrollando,también dar una reflexión de vida según yo.
Wow, I haven't experienced such a great story like this since Adastra. Very well done. It has all the ups and downs and doesn't lose momentum after making strong emotional connections with characters. My favorite thing about Hearthfire is that the best moments never felt rushed. I can tell you really put some effort into this story. Thank you Rolibar. I truly enjoyed it.
Enjoying the vn thus far, really like the narrative style and of course the content . Have noticed some redundancy in descriptions though. For example, the first paragraph. You don't need to mention it's the cabin of the car, since you already mentioned it was a car engine, just small things like that, but they can add up
Thanks for the catch! I try my best, but some redundancies are bound to slip in, hah.
The writing certainly smoothes our later. The prologue is the roughest part of this story. I had never written in extended first person before, and the VN format was completely new to me.
Thanks for still giving it a chance, though ~
Oh! And if you find more mistakes, feel free to message me privately on Itch or Twitter to let me know! I'd love to fix them.
Last time I played this VN was around last year, I can't believe that when I picked this VN up again it has finished? I just have so many words to say now that I binged everything in 12 hours.
First of all, this is one of my FAVOURITE VN's of all time! I love the story, I love how fleshed out the characters are, I love how the plot is not rushed at all. Everything felt organic. Tonrak is such a sweetheart. I've never cried nor been moved a lot in a VN before but Hearthfire is the first one that has made me bawl my eyes out but also laugh at some moments in the story.
I love your work. I'm looking forward to more projects!!!
I just finished this after following it for quite some time. This was one of the most satisfying reads I've had in a while. Without spoiling anything, the near end was bittersweet and got me tearing up. T_T The writing was chef's kiss. Very few VN relationships have me rooting for them as much as these two. The character development was something I haven't seen in many VNs on here. The love interest's personality shined through to me. He was a rare type of person that you genuinely wish nothing but the best for. It had some tropes without being annoying, more like just a sprinkling to add some spice to the side characters. The fact that this is a finished VN alone makes it a HUGE accomplishment in my eyes.
Do I recommend? Yes, a thousand times yes. This is a 10/10 must read. The only thing that bums me out is its not a super long read, like 10ish hours but it honestly works regardless because by the end you feel for a lot of the characters. (I don't usually advocate this but the author has a pateron if you want to support their future projects. Do so if you're able and/or RATE the VN!)
I am crying cuz it's finished😭 i love the story very much, the struggles they've been trough, the moments they shared, man... This is probably one of my favorite fvn of all time. 10/10 would recommend:)
I apologize in advanced for this extremely long comment. I also apologize if it is a bit scattered. I only just finished reading maybe 15 minutes ago, and I'm still reeling. I have a lot of thoughts, and writing them down always helps me get through them. I want to first congratulate you on completing this visual novel. It is a feat to be proud of, and I am so happy that I got the chance to read your work. In all honesty, I feel a weird sense of regret with reading it. It was such a fantastic story, and I struggle to imagine getting over it any time soon. I enjoyed it so much that I feel almost hollow now that it is over. I know this will pass with time, however.
I first found this VN when the penultimate update was released to the public. I decided to hold off on reading it until it was completed. To that end, I started reading four days ago. Now that I have completed the story, I find myself regretting not taking more time to savor it. I spent about nine hours reading through. I still need to go back to try the other choices at some point, but I think I will give it a few days to settle. I really loved the way choices were handled. I think my favorite scene of the entire VN was when Chris woke up being cuddled by Tonraq in the cave. Having the choice to wiggle out because both should be in on that decision was really cool. Consent is sexy, and I really appreciated that choice. I ended up completely passing on sex scenes for this read through. I am always much more interested in the romantic buildup, so this was a pleasant surprise for me. And my god, what a buildup it was.
I'm gonna bold the topic of each of the following paragraphs. I wanna give as thorough of feedback as possible, but don't worry, it is all positive :3
Relationship
I have read a lot of furry visual novels in the last couple years. I won't try to rank Hearthfire compared to any other, because I feel that diminishes the value of each unique story. That said, I think the progression of the relationship between Chris and Tonraq might be the best I've ever read. The pace felt perfect, and the little moments where Tonraq started to open up a bit followed by retreating into his shell were really well done. The way the reader could feel him start to open up with each passing scene was really touching. I found myself really concerned with how the story would go due to reading some comments of people crying. I tend to do really bad with bittersweet endings, so I was worried something would go wrong for the duo. I am so happy I gave it a chance and kept reading. My only wish is that we'd gotten to see a little more of their relationship after declaring their love. Maybe in the summer episode?
Side Characters
God the side characters are good. All the different personalities were balanced really well, and they all played nicely off each other. I loved the other relationships in this VN almost as much as the main one. Yuka and Phillip's relationship was really fun to read from an observer's perspective. It was fun to watch Yuka's pissy personality melt away whenever Phillip was near. It was also so heartwarming to see Yuka open up to Chris as the story progressed. The other pair of Hallie and Lily was a surprise. It's rare to see much in the way of sapphic romance in this space, so it was cool to see the start of theirs. Once again, really hope to see more of them in the summer episode. Hallie's personality was a touch overbearing for my tastes, but I think she was such a wonderful part of the story.
It would be a mistake to not at least mention the rest of the side cast. I find myself torn on Darryl. One of my exes was very similar to Darryl, and I found myself jumping firmly into the hate camp for him very early. I definitely struggle to let that go a bit, but I am so happy he had a redemption. My only wish is that he got a tiny bit more screen time at the end. The scene at the diner was really fun, but I find myself craving a bit more of their friendship. Finally, I'll talk about both Kuak and Panuk. I'm definitely still not the biggest fan of Kuak, but I was very happy that he saw some kind of reason towards the end. Owning up for your own shitty mistakes is a big step, and I'm glad he sought to explain rather than excuse his actions. For Panuk, I don't have too much to say. I loved him. I always love the sagely grandpa type that helps set the rest of the cast straight, even in the background. OH! I almost forgot about Tonraq's mom. I could feel his love for her throughout the entire story, and the scene at the end of visiting her grave was so touching. Side note, I'm guessing the fresh flowers were from Kuak.
Writing and Art
I actually don't have too much to say here. Everything was tight. There were very few if any moments where I felt the writing or art was out of place or off. Everything tied together very well. I think the thing that surprised me the most was the style of comedy. I rarely see a more dry style of humor, so it was refreshing to read how Tonraq joked around with Chris. The tense moments were also done really well. The scene towards the end of their trip to meet Darryl was so freaking good. The action on the lake was top notch, and the payoff of their confession after added much needed levity. As for the art, I just wish there was a gallery or the CGs were posted on their own somewhere. There were quite a few that I would love to use as a wallpaper. I might end up having to go back through on my computer at some point and screenshot my favorites (which were most of them). I think my absolute favorite was either the surprise kiss in the shower or the one with the northern lights. The kiss because my god it was cute and the northern lights for the emotional impact of it.
I think I will leave this massive comment here. I definitely have more to say, but I feel I've overstayed my welcome a tad bit lol. The lull until I find the next story to read is gonna be rough after this one. Once again, thank you for such a wonderful story. It is one I won't soon forget. Truly an 11/10 experience!
I remember finding out about this game when the first build came out, and how I easily fell in love with the characters. It has been a pleasure to follow every single update, looking forward to each one every time! I can’t believe how long it’s been too. The story is so beautiful; The premise is simple yet pulled off so well, the characters AND the character developments are amazing, and it’s overall just written very well (I love the writing so much omg). I’m sad it’s over, and I’m gonna miss the two cuties Chris and Tonraq, but the ending was very satisfying.
Seriously, Congrats on finishing your game! It’s something not many others have done 😂 You guys are a great team and I can’t wait to see what else you create! Thank you for creating this VN!
It is sad that it ended, but it was such a beautiful ending. After all that happened they deserved that happiness.
Thank you so much for bringing this to us, I am looking for future histories and epilogues, but for now know that this has bringed happiness to us that read it through.
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HOLY SHIT THIS VN IS SO GOOD! PERFEECCTOO!!! This is BY FAR the best slice of life VNs I have read so far (over 20 VNs read so far). I AM SO LOOKING FORWARDD TO THE AUTHOR'S FUTURE WORKS!!! EASILY 5 STAR RATING. ABSOLUTELLYY RECOMMENDED TO READ IF YOU LOVE CRYING TO INTIMATE MOMENTS 😔🤚
I am just crying that is a so lovely story.
I love it.
"Mmmeeeoow!
A day after finished readcthe story I just dreamed with a aged man coming to the place where I lived in Rio telling me I am going to met someone. So after I was surrounded by four or five kids/teenagers and young man c9me after with black hair that flow above his shoulders.
They look like all from same place.
That would be nice to have a family like that maybe."
Absolutely adore this VN! It hits all the right buttons for me: Lovable, endearing characters, well paced and written story, genuine romance and tender moments, and fantastic artwork and sprites. It was an absolute joy to experience~
I'm sorry if this is a silly question, but how do you rate? I've been told this is important and helps.
If you're asking then you're probably on mobile. I've found that you can't rate itch.io games on mobile for some reason. If your on mobile chrome which is what I use. There should be three circles in the top right corner. Tap that and scroll until you see "Desktop site". Once you tap that, the page you're on should reload and be slightly changed. Then you'll see "Rate this game" in the top right corner of the page. From there you don't need me to tell you what to. To reverse the changes you just do what you did before.
Thank you. I was in doubt because I somehow already rated some VNs
You're welcome👍👍
what's the name of the song that plays during the Northern Lights scene? I fliping love it, from the lyrics, the instumentation, the vocals, to even the dynamics, Everything is balanced in such an amazing way, it fits the scene perfectly, and I would love to add it to my playlists
Spoilers ahead (sorta):
just finished the main story, such a heart filled romance story, so many story's I've read on here have been completly centered on intercourse, but with this one, we're able to skip completly past the sex scenes, not only that, but we're able to do it in a way that fits organicly with the story, in many other vns, they'll just cut out the artwork or have a weird scene jump in it, but this does it in a way that fits the story so smoothly.
It's just so amaizing how well you conveied the characters emotions, I could feel the love between the two grow graduly until it reached its peak when they confessed that love, and the choice to have it be an option, rather than just another text blurb to read through adds so much to moment, adding more weight to it, giving some actual meaning to it, its not something being said out of expectations or just because, the characters actually mean it.
Ima stop rambling now, This was such a joy to read, and I'm excited to read the epliouge, thank you for the story.
The epilogue is up and available for public. Just look for the files labeled "HFBonusEpilogue"~
It's called As You Need by Tyler Edwards!
I'm glad you enjoyed that particular selection. I heard the song when searching for music and everything resonated. I knew I had to put it in~
MMMM I LOVE CRYING!!!!! FUCK THIS WAS SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!
love ur work really great vn
I really like the piano music in the main menu, but I can't find the name of the song.
And I really like Ton and Chris, they are so sweet!
The name of the main menu music is Hearthfire in the game files
I have created a link with the theme in case you don't want to sift through the game files
https://jmp.sh/s/BG13wecOVO94l1yKiVwy
Hiii dear developer!👋
We are a team of ExGames translators. We would like to ask permission to translate your vn's from the original language into russian. A lot of people liked your novel, but due to the language barrier they cannot read it in the original. Our team is translating various furry novels into Russian, and in order for people to be able to touch your work, we are asking for your permission to translate. There are a large number of short stories in the list of translations we have, and we would like your short story to join it.
Our translators receive a nominal payment for translation, since the project is supported by donations from Russian-speaking readers. For translation, we use only publicly available versions of novels and, after translation is completed, we post them on a platform similar to Patreon for a period of 1-2 weeks for those who want to get earlier access to the translation. Subsequently, the translation becomes publicly available and any user can download it for free.
For each publication, we always add a link to the page with the novel, and if necessary, we can insert links to your social networks.
We are also ready to provide all the necessary translation files for their implementation in the official assembly, if you are interested in expanding the number of available languages for reading.
We really hope for a positive decision, as we want to further develop the Russian-speaking furry community.
Thanks for your time! Best regards, ExGames Translation Team❤️❤️
I haven't read any visual novel in a couple of years but when I saw this I was like why not?
Man was I in for a roller-coaster of emotions. I wouldn't have thought that I would spend my entire day reading this but it was so worth. It was always something about these types of visual novels that makes you appreciate life. Regarding the story, it gets a 11/10 in my book. I feel like the pace was well written and each character had their own set of value in the story. I regret not picking this up sooner. I'm just speechless, man. I hope I'm not the only one feeling this way. The message this whole story really speaks to me, I've been in a super similar predicament as the MC so it really resonated with me. Thank you again for creating this wonderful story.
I can’t tell you how much this story just, wow. Blew me off my feet. All the characters are wonderfully written, and I was feeling the same emotions that our lovely pairing was feeling all throughout.
Tonraq is up there with some of my favorite furry visual novel guys. Honestly, it felt like a movie I could keep watching, even if it, like everything, has to end eventually.
Thank you for sharing this with us. From one creator to another, this only pushes me to do the same. Truly, it was a great experience.
-Arbi
This is an absolute gem. The story made me tear up and the bear is drop-dead hot. Perhaps a defining work of the furry VN genre.
Can someone tell me the song playing when they were at Tonraq's favourite place?
As you need- Tyler Edwards
Honestly one of the best VNs I have ever read.
Such an incredible story.
I was sad it was over; But, after finding out there is an extra story coming our continuing this world has me so excited!
10/10
I just finished reading it, and wow, it’s without a doubt the most incredible story I’ve ever read! I’m honestly at a loss for words every part of it was breathtaking the story is beautifully crafted, heartwarming, and so impactful. Huge thanks to the dev for creating such an amazing masterpiece!
Sin palabras,muy muy buena la NV me encantó había quedado con un vacío al terminar otra NV pero está me ayudó mucho para superarla 😍👌😊
Hi, here is Chinese translate team.
According Patreon's vote, we also tell Chinese players the situation.
Here is Chinese players' thought, they also willing waiting for game completed.
I haven't cried so hard like this since finishing Adastra and I think this vn is one of the best VNs I ever read comparing to Adastra this vn is the next best one like a 15/10 in the score and my love to this heartwarming vn
Keep up the amazing work <3
Acabó de terminar con esta historia y fue increíble no me esperaba que me causará muchas emociones fue muy emotivo como se fue desarrollando,también dar una reflexión de vida según yo.
♥️👍
Wow, I haven't experienced such a great story like this since Adastra. Very well done. It has all the ups and downs and doesn't lose momentum after making strong emotional connections with characters. My favorite thing about Hearthfire is that the best moments never felt rushed. I can tell you really put some effort into this story. Thank you Rolibar. I truly enjoyed it.
What was the song at the end(not as you need tho, the one that happens before or during credits) just asking
Sure thing! It's called "Now or Never"
Enjoying the vn thus far, really like the narrative style and of course the content . Have noticed some redundancy in descriptions though. For example, the first paragraph. You don't need to mention it's the cabin of the car, since you already mentioned it was a car engine, just small things like that, but they can add up
Thanks for the catch! I try my best, but some redundancies are bound to slip in, hah.
The writing certainly smoothes our later. The prologue is the roughest part of this story. I had never written in extended first person before, and the VN format was completely new to me.
Thanks for still giving it a chance, though ~
Oh! And if you find more mistakes, feel free to message me privately on Itch or Twitter to let me know! I'd love to fix them.
Last time I played this VN was around last year, I can't believe that when I picked this VN up again it has finished? I just have so many words to say now that I binged everything in 12 hours.
First of all, this is one of my FAVOURITE VN's of all time! I love the story, I love how fleshed out the characters are, I love how the plot is not rushed at all. Everything felt organic. Tonrak is such a sweetheart. I've never cried nor been moved a lot in a VN before but Hearthfire is the first one that has made me bawl my eyes out but also laugh at some moments in the story.
I love your work. I'm looking forward to more projects!!!
I just finished this after following it for quite some time. This was one of the most satisfying reads I've had in a while. Without spoiling anything, the near end was bittersweet and got me tearing up. T_T The writing was chef's kiss. Very few VN relationships have me rooting for them as much as these two. The character development was something I haven't seen in many VNs on here. The love interest's personality shined through to me. He was a rare type of person that you genuinely wish nothing but the best for. It had some tropes without being annoying, more like just a sprinkling to add some spice to the side characters. The fact that this is a finished VN alone makes it a HUGE accomplishment in my eyes.
Do I recommend? Yes, a thousand times yes. This is a 10/10 must read. The only thing that bums me out is its not a super long read, like 10ish hours but it honestly works regardless because by the end you feel for a lot of the characters. (I don't usually advocate this but the author has a pateron if you want to support their future projects. Do so if you're able and/or RATE the VN!)
It's over. It's a miracle.
I am crying cuz it's finished😭 i love the story very much, the struggles they've been trough, the moments they shared, man... This is probably one of my favorite fvn of all time. 10/10 would recommend:)
Very curious is there kuak route in the game?
Screaming and flipping tables now that it's over. This is why I read furry vn's, I can never find depth like this in other mediums.
This was an absolute awesome vn. I really enjoyed it. Thanks :)
I apologize in advanced for this extremely long comment. I also apologize if it is a bit scattered. I only just finished reading maybe 15 minutes ago, and I'm still reeling. I have a lot of thoughts, and writing them down always helps me get through them. I want to first congratulate you on completing this visual novel. It is a feat to be proud of, and I am so happy that I got the chance to read your work. In all honesty, I feel a weird sense of regret with reading it. It was such a fantastic story, and I struggle to imagine getting over it any time soon. I enjoyed it so much that I feel almost hollow now that it is over. I know this will pass with time, however.
I first found this VN when the penultimate update was released to the public. I decided to hold off on reading it until it was completed. To that end, I started reading four days ago. Now that I have completed the story, I find myself regretting not taking more time to savor it. I spent about nine hours reading through. I still need to go back to try the other choices at some point, but I think I will give it a few days to settle. I really loved the way choices were handled. I think my favorite scene of the entire VN was when Chris woke up being cuddled by Tonraq in the cave. Having the choice to wiggle out because both should be in on that decision was really cool. Consent is sexy, and I really appreciated that choice. I ended up completely passing on sex scenes for this read through. I am always much more interested in the romantic buildup, so this was a pleasant surprise for me. And my god, what a buildup it was.
I'm gonna bold the topic of each of the following paragraphs. I wanna give as thorough of feedback as possible, but don't worry, it is all positive :3
Relationship
I have read a lot of furry visual novels in the last couple years. I won't try to rank Hearthfire compared to any other, because I feel that diminishes the value of each unique story. That said, I think the progression of the relationship between Chris and Tonraq might be the best I've ever read. The pace felt perfect, and the little moments where Tonraq started to open up a bit followed by retreating into his shell were really well done. The way the reader could feel him start to open up with each passing scene was really touching. I found myself really concerned with how the story would go due to reading some comments of people crying. I tend to do really bad with bittersweet endings, so I was worried something would go wrong for the duo. I am so happy I gave it a chance and kept reading. My only wish is that we'd gotten to see a little more of their relationship after declaring their love. Maybe in the summer episode?
Side Characters
God the side characters are good. All the different personalities were balanced really well, and they all played nicely off each other. I loved the other relationships in this VN almost as much as the main one. Yuka and Phillip's relationship was really fun to read from an observer's perspective. It was fun to watch Yuka's pissy personality melt away whenever Phillip was near. It was also so heartwarming to see Yuka open up to Chris as the story progressed. The other pair of Hallie and Lily was a surprise. It's rare to see much in the way of sapphic romance in this space, so it was cool to see the start of theirs. Once again, really hope to see more of them in the summer episode. Hallie's personality was a touch overbearing for my tastes, but I think she was such a wonderful part of the story.
It would be a mistake to not at least mention the rest of the side cast. I find myself torn on Darryl. One of my exes was very similar to Darryl, and I found myself jumping firmly into the hate camp for him very early. I definitely struggle to let that go a bit, but I am so happy he had a redemption. My only wish is that he got a tiny bit more screen time at the end. The scene at the diner was really fun, but I find myself craving a bit more of their friendship. Finally, I'll talk about both Kuak and Panuk. I'm definitely still not the biggest fan of Kuak, but I was very happy that he saw some kind of reason towards the end. Owning up for your own shitty mistakes is a big step, and I'm glad he sought to explain rather than excuse his actions. For Panuk, I don't have too much to say. I loved him. I always love the sagely grandpa type that helps set the rest of the cast straight, even in the background. OH! I almost forgot about Tonraq's mom. I could feel his love for her throughout the entire story, and the scene at the end of visiting her grave was so touching. Side note, I'm guessing the fresh flowers were from Kuak.
Writing and Art
I actually don't have too much to say here. Everything was tight. There were very few if any moments where I felt the writing or art was out of place or off. Everything tied together very well. I think the thing that surprised me the most was the style of comedy. I rarely see a more dry style of humor, so it was refreshing to read how Tonraq joked around with Chris. The tense moments were also done really well. The scene towards the end of their trip to meet Darryl was so freaking good. The action on the lake was top notch, and the payoff of their confession after added much needed levity. As for the art, I just wish there was a gallery or the CGs were posted on their own somewhere. There were quite a few that I would love to use as a wallpaper. I might end up having to go back through on my computer at some point and screenshot my favorites (which were most of them). I think my absolute favorite was either the surprise kiss in the shower or the one with the northern lights. The kiss because my god it was cute and the northern lights for the emotional impact of it.
I think I will leave this massive comment here. I definitely have more to say, but I feel I've overstayed my welcome a tad bit lol. The lull until I find the next story to read is gonna be rough after this one. Once again, thank you for such a wonderful story. It is one I won't soon forget. Truly an 11/10 experience!
bro this has me crying so hard a 5:40 am
I remember finding out about this game when the first build came out, and how I easily fell in love with the characters. It has been a pleasure to follow every single update, looking forward to each one every time! I can’t believe how long it’s been too. The story is so beautiful; The premise is simple yet pulled off so well, the characters AND the character developments are amazing, and it’s overall just written very well (I love the writing so much omg). I’m sad it’s over, and I’m gonna miss the two cuties Chris and Tonraq, but the ending was very satisfying.
Seriously, Congrats on finishing your game! It’s something not many others have done 😂 You guys are a great team and I can’t wait to see what else you create! Thank you for creating this VN!
It is sad that it ended, but it was such a beautiful ending. After all that happened they deserved that happiness.
Thank you so much for bringing this to us, I am looking for future histories and epilogues, but for now know that this has bringed happiness to us that read it through.
I wish you as much love as those two have felt.
Beautiful, I finished it and i cried of joy 😍🥰
你好，作者大大，关于额外的故事——炉火传说，是否在更新完最后一展之后放出呢？我十分的想知道。
Here we go the final chapter ❤️ thanks for the hard work boss
Can I ask why Chris call Yuka "Puke-a" in ch13 ?
It's a play on words with the name "Yuka" and "puke." It's making fun of him for barfing in an earlier chapter, essentially.
Thanks for answer me.
Btw, the chinese version still follow the public version published, from 0.1.2 to 0.11.1, because 0.12.1 due our problem, so we didn't published it.
It's a dialogue choice. Click on it.
the text to speech option seems to randomly quit working at times along with the auto forward option at the same time
other than those random issues the vn is a great romace story and im a bit sad now that its finished