wait just a moment! didn't you write behind the curtains beastars fanfic on A03 because the author of that series name is rolibar and if i remember correctly that author of that series even has the same pfp cuz i just started the series last night and i recognized the name rolibar and i thought that can't be just a coincidence.
Behind the Curtain was my first long-term project! I'd like to think my writing improved significantly along the way. Without BtC, Hearthfire probably wouldn't be a thing.
That was so good, this update felt like a hot coup of hot chocolate in a cold day. (After the scare with the doctor...(also, damn that cat only in his underwear looked REALLY fine, lucky Yuka))
Well, the way they were sleeping was mad cute too...
And now I'm like, I know the place is harsh, but I still stand by my thoughts of staying. Tbh I wouldn't care of being stranded in mars if the company there was like this.
I'm new in this story, honestly i start to read because a was searching for new things.
I need to tell that I love this game, I wasn't hoping to much, but it got me, I love tonraq, it's adorable, it took me a few days to read it all because university, but i've loved every part, this got me to much, I'm gonna wait for the next update, i wish the best to the creator this is so good, i need to remark once again that i loved it.
(sorry if I say something bad, english isn't my main language)
I will say, I am a bit confused by the timeline. It sounds like the breakup with Darryl happened about a year before the start of the VN but the messages from Darryl and the flashback to the breakup both make it seem like the breakup just happened right before the trip to his sister's which also makes sense in that the breakup would be the catalyst to go visit his sister.
Which is it? I am leaning towards a year ago but the texts are strange. I am still going through at least so maybe it will clear up.
I also noticed that Philip used his card instead of cash when he bought coffee and just assumed that you messed that up. I see now that that is not the case, very nice detail!
okay, so i'm new with this VN, and i just play the lastest update. I just realize that all of the public release are not included in the lastest update. So, I'm confused for the story itself. Do i have to download every patch/build from the beginning?
Just finished up to the current public build... in love with Ton lol. I've seen this floating around for a while but finally got the time to sit down and play and enjoyed it thoroughly. Ton is so adorable, excited for more. Good work and wishing good health to everyone involved
Tonraq is a lot of fun for me, personally. He doesn't talk or behave like a lot of VN love interests. Plus he's got that dry sense of humor once he opens up.
If I may ask, is Tonraq the only love interest ? Or would there be more options ? (Not that I'm complaining about Tonraq, since I can love him for years on end 😁)
I really enjoyed this VN. Had some very sweet moments. Is the author Canadian?? Also my only complaint is you are using the wrong province. Iskut and Tuktsayda mountains are in British Columbia (were I live) not the Yukon. Plus if we gonna use Canadian wild life were is the moose??
I'm not actually Canadian, so I've been doing my best. Fun fact! Philip was originally going to be a moose.
And, yeah, hah. I was doing some research on Chris' path to get to his sister, and it passes right by Iskut. Didn't discover it wasn't in the Yukon until I had everything settled.
Thats awesome!! Ya this story is really enjoyable. Like how Chris has a type "not out but sorta". Also glad Philip isn't a moose being a snow leopard fits better. I would see a moose more as a courier/delivery guy. Since they can travel long distances. Plus they can ram a train off the tracks so a little to burly to be a doctor.
Keep up the great work. Looking forward to more heartfelt moments <3<3
Xou've done an excellent job with pacing the romance :) it feels very natural, which is no easy task, especially when xou consider the circumstances that drive the story UwU
I can tell that writing romance is what drives xou as a writer, as xour skills really shine in these scenes~ ^^_
Aw, thanks! Making sure that pacing is on point has been a priority with me.
Romance is certainly a driving factor with this story. I wanted a large portion of it to revolve around opening Tonraq up and exploring the blooming relationship between him and Chris~
Then xou've set everything up really well for that :) it's always fun to be caught in a compromising situation and to find love in the most unexpected of places, even better when it's with a tsundere like Tonraq :p
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This new update isn't working for me. It keeps being seen as a threat.
Try turning off your windows antivirus and see if it would work
Thanks. It worked.
Love the new update. Keep up the good work, everyone that's working on this VN. Been reading since the very beginning.
Rolibar, I love everything you and your team is doing so much. Everything flows perfectly thanks so much for all you do.
I wish I could articulate how I feel about it. I need to catch the next patron update as I missed it this last time. Id die for everyone in this game.
Loved the new update <3
New update let's goooo 🙏
really need to see more
really need to see more;-;
I love this game, finished a little ago, already want more! Tonraq is soo good!
does this game include vore
Unless you count excessive pancake consumption, nope!
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wait just a moment! didn't you write behind the curtains beastars fanfic on A03 because the author of that series name is rolibar and if i remember correctly that author of that series even has the same pfp cuz i just started the series last night and i recognized the name rolibar and i thought that can't be just a coincidence.
Yep! That would be me!
Behind the Curtain was my first long-term project! I'd like to think my writing improved significantly along the way. Without BtC, Hearthfire probably wouldn't be a thing.
Wait what link please!
Sure thing!
will there be anyone else to date alse then tonraq?
Nope!
Sorry for bothering, in ch2, there is a place seems wrong.
"If you have no other place, you may stay with me." this sentence should be said by Tonraq, not inner words ?
Ah, thanks for catching that!
Nice update ton is just too cute.
Ton is cute~
That was so good, this update felt like a hot coup of hot chocolate in a cold day. (After the scare with the doctor...(also, damn that cat only in his underwear looked REALLY fine, lucky Yuka))
Well, the way they were sleeping was mad cute too...
And now I'm like, I know the place is harsh, but I still stand by my thoughts of staying. Tbh I wouldn't care of being stranded in mars if the company there was like this.
This right here.
These are my thoughts exactly.
Aw man, I'm glad you're enjoying it so much! Really makes me happy to know that character development/interactions are hitting home~
The Echo's reference when Yuke called Chris by Chase's name was actually really good
Haha! I'm glad somebody caught that one~
Yuka listening to your conversation with your ex Darryl is peak story... I love what you guys are putting out here.
I did a small replay and I'm about to start the new content, brb.
Haha, you can't blame him for listening in. After all, you got to know everything about him and his ex.
Will there be a possibility of romance with other characters, especially with the doctor/snow leopard?
I'm afraid he's too busy with his fingers wrapped around another leash~
Ah, shame, but I'm happy for him. Well, I don't really like bara, but good luck in developing your game)
Right now!
I like the visual novel is amazing i'll waiting other update
Wait no longer!~
how many nsfw cgs are there in total?
There's a handful so far! Bound to be more later~
vibe
I'm new in this story, honestly i start to read because a was searching for new things.
I need to tell that I love this game, I wasn't hoping to much, but it got me, I love tonraq, it's adorable, it took me a few days to read it all because university, but i've loved every part, this got me to much, I'm gonna wait for the next update, i wish the best to the creator this is so good, i need to remark once again that i loved it.
(sorry if I say something bad, english isn't my main language)
I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far! It's really gratifying to see when people genuinely enjoy the story so much~
i think ist just me, but every time i download the archive is corrupted
What platform are you attempting to download/install it on?
I haven't finished the previous update yet, the new update released already ...
I like Yuka's new appearance. He looks more ‘mature’
Honestly, I love Yuka's new appearance as well. It's a major glowup~
I will say, I am a bit confused by the timeline. It sounds like the breakup with Darryl happened about a year before the start of the VN but the messages from Darryl and the flashback to the breakup both make it seem like the breakup just happened right before the trip to his sister's which also makes sense in that the breakup would be the catalyst to go visit his sister.
Which is it? I am leaning towards a year ago but the texts are strange. I am still going through at least so maybe it will clear up.
Overall fantastic!
I also noticed that Philip used his card instead of cash when he bought coffee and just assumed that you messed that up. I see now that that is not the case, very nice detail!
About a year ago, yeah! It's not fully spelled out, so I can see why things might be a lil confusing.
okay, so i'm new with this VN, and i just play the lastest update. I just realize that all of the public release are not included in the lastest update. So, I'm confused for the story itself. Do i have to download every patch/build from the beginning?
Oops, that's my fault!
I accidentally uploaded a test build. The 0.8.1 version will have the story from the beginning.
Ahh, i see... Hope i can read the 0.8.1 version ASAP, cause im curious what exactly happened to Chris (even i have the general picture to it)
I like how this is going so far. I just noticed a little mistake... (possible spoiler)
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There's an space missing in this line between "clothes" and "a".
That's all. Thank you! :D
Edit: Also, Why doesn't USA use the metric system! As far as i know, it's the only country in the world that doesn't, XD
Just finished up to the current public build... in love with Ton lol. I've seen this floating around for a while but finally got the time to sit down and play and enjoyed it thoroughly. Ton is so adorable, excited for more. Good work and wishing good health to everyone involved
Tonraq is a lot of fun for me, personally. He doesn't talk or behave like a lot of VN love interests. Plus he's got that dry sense of humor once he opens up.
How much of the story is finished?
The latest 0.8.1 build has the entire story so far! Sorry about the possible confusion!
Oh my god, the reworks are just so...
🥰🥰🥰🥰
I know, right? Very big upgrade~
A very warm story, love this polar bear, thank you for making this fvn, looking forward to the next update.
Hey, thank you for reading! Without an audience, we wouldn't get anywhere.
If I may ask, is Tonraq the only love interest ? Or would there be more options ? (Not that I'm complaining about Tonraq, since I can love him for years on end 😁)
By the looks of things, this VN is linear. Tonraq's the only route.
I really enjoyed this VN. Had some very sweet moments. Is the author Canadian?? Also my only complaint is you are using the wrong province. Iskut and Tuktsayda mountains are in British Columbia (were I live) not the Yukon. Plus if we gonna use Canadian wild life were is the moose??
I'm glad you've been enjoying the VN so far!
I'm not actually Canadian, so I've been doing my best. Fun fact! Philip was originally going to be a moose.
And, yeah, hah. I was doing some research on Chris' path to get to his sister, and it passes right by Iskut. Didn't discover it wasn't in the Yukon until I had everything settled.
Thats awesome!! Ya this story is really enjoyable. Like how Chris has a type "not out but sorta". Also glad Philip isn't a moose being a snow leopard fits better. I would see a moose more as a courier/delivery guy. Since they can travel long distances. Plus they can ram a train off the tracks so a little to burly to be a doctor.
Keep up the great work. Looking forward to more heartfelt moments <3<3
A couple'a scenes made me tear up.
Damn, I love this VN.
Aww, I'm glad it's been a good read so far!
Hope you'll enjoy the later chapters too~
Oh, oh....
I don't know it's the time for update!
Wait, how tall exactly are Tonraq and Chris?
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Somehow, I could sniff Tonraq and Yuka relationship since Chris' first check-up
Sounds like my little hints paid off~
Tonraq is 7'11" and Chris is 5'11"~
They're tall!
what a juicy update i loved it
Xou've done an excellent job with pacing the romance :) it feels very natural, which is no easy task, especially when xou consider the circumstances that drive the story UwU
I can tell that writing romance is what drives xou as a writer, as xour skills really shine in these scenes~ ^^_
Amazing work! n_n/
Aw, thanks! Making sure that pacing is on point has been a priority with me.
Romance is certainly a driving factor with this story. I wanted a large portion of it to revolve around opening Tonraq up and exploring the blooming relationship between him and Chris~
Then xou've set everything up really well for that :) it's always fun to be caught in a compromising situation and to find love in the most unexpected of places, even better when it's with a tsundere like Tonraq :p
Keep up all the great work! ^^_
I'm a little late responding to this, but thanks so much for your support!
Balancing pacing and different elements of the story has always been important to us~